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I've been forced to create this blog ! I'm 20 years old I love my dog that's it.

Monday, 12 May 2008

First day.

Well I woke up nearly 7:00 according my watch which it was still working thankfully. I manage to get up and try to wake up Pablo, Karla and Pete, after a few minutes we started to panic, to realize what had happened and it became worst when we saw Pete laying dead. we worked our way out of the plane, it was almost destroyed, Idon't know how we survived.

When we were outside I went to check out the cockpit and the pilot was alive but with her two leag broken, so me and Pablo took her out carefully and provide her shelter and clothes beneath the remains of the plane. We were all shocked but we also were also concious about getting out of this place, so we all agreed to stay calmed and focused to first of all finding food ans water.

We divised in the distance a wood, a river also (following the map indications), a road and a village across the river. We thought of everything, even to go by foot to the village but when we were arguing about the plans Karla saw that smoke was coming out of the woods, so we decided to send someone to the woods to find food or help, knowing that the smoke could be just a fire.

So I volunteered to go so Pablo and Karla stayed taking care of Macarena who was the name of the pilot, they could stay well for two days because Pablo have brought some snacks and "fanta" in his suitcase in stead of clothes, but only for 2 days if they're lucky. So I left to the woods with a knife hoping to find help or at least food to buy us a few more days in this hell.

1 comment:

Thom said...

Very imaginative and some great use of vocabulary Camilo.

Be sure to check that you are consistent with your tenses:

"I managed to get up and tried to wake up Pablo, Karla and Pete, after a few minutes we started to panic, to realize what had happened and it became worst when we saw Pete laying dead."

Also, I'm not sure what you mean with this verb:
"We divised in the distance a wood..."
discovered? saw? noticed?

Be careful with using can in the past - they would be able to stay alive would be better than "they could stay well"